I like that Nadine needs to tell Abby about the difficulties of mob life more for herself then for Abby. Because really, Abby could die the fantasy and wouldn't be any worse off, but I think the fact that Nadine is forcing herself to recall the strife and hardship of this life that she walked into is so pragmatic and yet, really sad, all at the same time. I just wanted someone to hug her.
Your descriptions of Nadine's love of Fall were excellent. I'm not a huge Fall person myself, but you made me almost wish the summer would end so that I could enjoy those things about Fall that I do love. I had a feeling, as soon as Nadine walked into The Coffee Shop, that this was not going to be a quick stop off for coffee and really, could Sonny have been a bigger ass?? I loved Milo trying to stick up for Nadine and then Nadine realizing that Milo couldn't defy his boss and basically consenting to the pat down. That Sonny wasn't satisfied even with that, I called him every bad name I could think of. He's just beyond misogynistic, isn't he? But hey, any time we get SuperJase to the rescue, I'm cool with that. And totally cute that Nadine totally got that Jason's motives for walking her to work were not altogether altruistic - I have to say, I love your interpretation of Nadine... I so want to be her friend.
The other incidents were a nice glimpse into life as a mobster's wife - Johnny not coming home one night and then coming home injured the next. Nadine wanting a bit of freedom and Johnny insisting that she take a guard... They really are going to have to learn to compromise and not issue orders and ultimatums to one another if they're going to have a shot at a successful marriage.
In general, this story feels like it's right on the cusp of blowing up and getting really interesting and messy. I have to say, it's still really bugging me that I can't figure out all your foreshadowing and literally, I have a notepad where I've jotted down all the random ideas that pop into my head when I'm reading this story, just so that later, I can go back and see if I'm right or just completely insane.
I like that Nadine needs to tell Abby about the difficulties of mob life more for herself then for Abby. Because really, Abby could die the fantasy and wouldn't be any worse off, but I think the fact that Nadine is forcing herself to recall the strife and hardship of this life that she walked into is so pragmatic and yet, really sad, all at the same time. I just wanted someone to hug her.
Your descriptions of Nadine's love of Fall were excellent. I'm not a huge Fall person myself, but you made me almost wish the summer would end so that I could enjoy those things about Fall that I do love. I had a feeling, as soon as Nadine walked into The Coffee Shop, that this was not going to be a quick stop off for coffee and really, could Sonny have been a bigger ass?? I loved Milo trying to stick up for Nadine and then Nadine realizing that Milo couldn't defy his boss and basically consenting to the pat down. That Sonny wasn't satisfied even with that, I called him every bad name I could think of. He's just beyond misogynistic, isn't he? But hey, any time we get SuperJase to the rescue, I'm cool with that. And totally cute that Nadine totally got that Jason's motives for walking her to work were not altogether altruistic - I have to say, I love your interpretation of Nadine... I so want to be her friend.
The other incidents were a nice glimpse into life as a mobster's wife - Johnny not coming home one night and then coming home injured the next. Nadine wanting a bit of freedom and Johnny insisting that she take a guard... They really are going to have to learn to compromise and not issue orders and ultimatums to one another if they're going to have a shot at a successful marriage.
In general, this story feels like it's right on the cusp of blowing up and getting really interesting and messy. I have to say, it's still really bugging me that I can't figure out all your foreshadowing and literally, I have a notepad where I've jotted down all the random ideas that pop into my head when I'm reading this story, just so that later, I can go back and see if I'm right or just completely insane.
Loved it, Char, as always!
I'm so glad you're here, Jessie! Welcome.
You know, sometimes, with this story, it's hard for me to respond without giving anything anyway... which, I'm sure, you wouldn't actually mind. However, I'm hoping to surprise everyone or, at least, some of you with what I have up my sleeve. I'll say this much - you're interpretation of why Nadine had to impress upon Abby the less than pleasant aspects of being involved with someone in the mob was spot on, and I think, by the time the story is over, you'll realize WHY this self-convincing was so important for Nadine's character.
Oh! Your comments about the coffee shop reminded me of something. It's almost fortuitous that I posted this chapter now, what with all the spoilers out there about SuperJase! running to Nadine's rescue on the docks. While the situation and the context might have been different, the theme is the same, and I kind of like the fact that I was able to fit this into the story as well.
As for being Nadine's friend, I think that's the one trait about her that they've established the best on the show. We really don't know what she'd be like in a couple. Sure, she's crushing on Nikolas right now (yuck!), but, generally, she's just everyone's pal... and she's good at it.
Actually, I'm not a fall fan either. My favorite season is summer, and all those things that I listed about the season that Nadine loves so much, I hate. LOL It just seemed to fit her character better than summer did, and I got some inspiration from my Mom who is a fall freak.
Exploding, huh? Well, not yet. I'll give you this little tidbit. Everything builds and builds and builds until the end of chapter nine... and chapter ten is the concluding post. To put it mildly, we're going out with a band (no explosion pun intended).
Thanks for responding, Jessie! I always love hearing what you have to say.
OK so I have to tell you this last update was AWESOME!!!!
And not only b/c you had my favorite season in but b/c of all the different dynamics and "relationships" Nadine now needs to adjust to due to her marriage to Johnny.
But I have to say all the references to fall made me wish for football, jeans, apple cider and yes pumpkin all the things I love about fall. Especially the football. Alas, that is still several months away so I will survive thinking about my shorts and sandals. Now I have gotten off track.
And I knew you could bring back selfish, self serving Sonny into the fic b/c after PMPs I was actually liking Sonny .
I just loved how you began to delve into the consequences that Nadine has to face being married to Johnny. Like she can't just go into the coffee shop for a cup of coffee. Stupid but true. I also found it interesting that she still walks to work. I like that b/c it keeps her human and not her taking advantage of her new found "situation" where money is concerned.
Plus, the occasional Liason reference NEVER HURTS in my book
OK so I have to tell you this last update was AWESOME!!!!
And not only b/c you had my favorite season in but b/c of all the different dynamics and "relationships" Nadine now needs to adjust to due to her marriage to Johnny.
But I have to say all the references to fall made me wish for football, jeans, apple cider and yes pumpkin all the things I love about fall. Especially the football. Alas, that is still several months away so I will survive thinking about my shorts and sandals. Now I have gotten off track.
And I knew you could bring back selfish, self serving Sonny into the fic b/c after PMPs I was actually liking Sonny .
I just loved how you began to delve into the consequences that Nadine has to face being married to Johnny. Like she can't just go into the coffee shop for a cup of coffee. Stupid but true. I also found it interesting that she still walks to work. I like that b/c it keeps her human and not her taking advantage of her new found "situation" where money is concerned.
Plus, the occasional Liason reference NEVER HURTS in my book
Awesome update Char!!!
Jules
Oh, after we talked about you adoring pumpkin, I should have known that you were another fall freak. Nerd.
However, I agree with you about this chapter. So far, we've pretty much had Nadine in such a bubble. Sure, she branched out a few times - once with Claudia in a scene, once with Elizabeth, and then with Doctor Ford, Epiphany, and Lulu, but she's pretty much been isolated with Johnny and Abby in this story. Well, that certainly wasn't the case in this chapter.
While nothing overly dramatic happened, if nothing else, I proved that her life is not normal, that her marriage is not normal. And, sure, normal is overrated, but, at times, it can be refreshing and almost necessary, too. The question is just how much will the fact that her relationship with Johnny isn't normal bother Nadine?
Oh, and I knew you wouldn't mind the happy Liason reference, especially at this point where we'll take just about anything.
OK so I cannot believe you left it like that!!!!!! You are one evil girl. BUT I LOVED THE UPDATE ANYWAY!!!!!!!
From Johnny getting down on his knees to play with Cameron and Jake, b/c let's face it there is nothing more attractive then a hot guy playing with 2 small children without a care in the world. Oh and I can even taste the hot cider myself!MMMMM to the cute, cute playful banter the 2 of them have.
And you know how much I love the Liason references. B/C it gives me a little taste to my favorite couple while reading about my favorite "non" couple. And man when you describe Thanksgiving with the Jaxs, the Corinthos, the Morgans and the Q's wild things did enter my mind
Right now though the main thing in my mind is WHAT HAPPENED!!!!! Ahhhh I know it will be cleared up.....Eventually
You so know how to keep this writer begging for more
Where's Johnny?? Guess that's the million dollar question, huh?
He's not dead because Nadine and Abby are talking about him in the present and future so that's not it.
Is he seriously injured and in the hospital?? But if that's the case, why isn't Nadine there with him?
Is he hiding/on the run?? But would he really leave Nadine behind?
And just who hired/sent the Thanksgiving assassin?
You know, what I really ought to do is go back and reread this from the beginning because I know there are clues as to what's really going on.
Oh, and cutest thing ever?? Johnny and Nadine with the Morgan (!!!) boys in the park. Him commenting on her cider, then going out to play with Cam and Jake like a kid himself... *Sigh* I love your Johnny (not as much as I love Jason in IPS, but close.)
Oh, and cutest thing ever?? Johnny and Nadine with the Morgan (!!!) boys in the park. Him commenting on her cider, then going out to play with Cam and Jake like a kid himself... *Sigh* I love your Johnny (not as much as I love Jason in IPS, but close.)
Re: Feedback « Reply #11 on Aug 30, 2008, 2:46pm »
So I think I might have to start stalking you now.... You got me all hooked on Nohnny but I so need more more more!! hee hee ETA.. see my first post warning though my next 10 will be to annoy you
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Re: Feedback « Reply #12 on Jan 6, 2009, 11:41pm »
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Oh, and cutest thing ever?? Johnny and Nadine with the Morgan (!!!) boys in the park. Him commenting on her cider, then going out to play with Cam and Jake like a kid himself... *Sigh* I love your Johnny
I miss this Johnny… and the version of him on the show that inspired this one, because, quite frankly, the guy who calls himself Johnny on my screen right now is a stranger. I don’t know him, Jessie.
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So I think I might have to start stalking you now.... You got me all hooked on Nohnny but I so need more more more!! hee hee ETA.. see my first post warning though my next 10 will be to annoy you
There are only a couple chapters left of this story, Tara, and, though I’m not swept up in the Nohnny love right now, I do still like this story, so it will be finished. Promise. Just, please, be patient with me. I’m trying to worm my way out of my latest… and longest funk.
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Welcome. 
However, I'm hoping to surprise everyone or, at least, some of you with what I have up my sleeve. I'll say this much - you're interpretation of why Nadine had to impress upon Abby the less than pleasant aspects of being involved with someone in the mob was spot on, and I think, by the time the story is over, you'll realize WHY this self-convincing was so important for Nadine's character. ![[avatar]](http://i164.photobucket.com/albums/u31/jamandaison/2008%20Liason/BeatingTheHellOutOfIt_avi.gif)
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