Re: Reinventing a Quartermaine - Feedback « Reply #1 on Dec 24, 2008, 3:07am »
You have a way of writing bittersweet Liason fics. I'm not really sure how to take this one. On the one hand the beginning was awesome--not at all the norm, when it comes to Liason. The ending though I wanted to beat Elizabeth with a stick, for bowing down to Sarah and punking out the way she did. Not to mention Sonny helping Jason but not truly helping him until fifteen years later. Like I said bittersweet. They ended up together so it was worth it. Wonderful Job!
Re: Reinventing a Quartermaine - Feedback « Reply #2 on Jan 3, 2009, 2:16am »
ITA with shellyme. This was an amazing fic, the beginning was perfect, the middle was perfect, but by the end, I too wanted Liz to stand up to Sarah and not slink away in the middle of the night. I do however understand that she had family issues and she didn't trust herself to win. I also dont' think Jase fought hard enough--apparently living up to Guza's standards of today. That said, you are a very talented author and I truly look forward to reading more from you. Keep up the good work.
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Re: Reinventing a Quartermaine - Feedback « Reply #3 on Jan 6, 2009, 11:16pm »
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You have a way of writing bittersweet Liason fics. I'm not really sure how to take this one. On the one hand the beginning was awesome--not at all the norman when it comes to Liason. The ending though I wanted to beat Elizabeth with a stick, for bowing down to Sarah and punking out the way she did. Not to mention Sonny helping Jason but not truly helping him until fifteen years later. Like I said bittersweet. They ended up together so it was worth it. Wonderful Job!
I think a lot of my stories turn out bittersweet, shellyme, because, while I enjoy fluff and smut and everything else that comes with those two things, I really don’t enjoy writing them. I adore writing angst, so I have to throw in some curve balls to almost every story. *shrugs* I guess the good news is that most Liason fans are masochists, so they don’t mind my style. I’m so glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for reading and commenting!
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ITA with shellyme. This was an amazing fic, the beginning was perfect, the middle was perfect, but by the end, I too wanted Liz to stand up to Sarah and not slink away in the middle of the night. I do however understand that she had family issues and she didn't trust herself to win. I also dont' think Jase fought hard enough--apparently living up to Guza's standards of today. That said, you are a very talented author and I truly look forward to reading more from you. Keep up the good work.
Thank you so much, eygirl33! It’s a joy to read that you liked the story so much. And you were right. Elizabeth did still have some family issues, and Jason could have fought for her harder. Also, don’t forget that Sonny could have stepped in, too. Basically, what happened to Jason and Elizabeth is just further proof that they were an imperfect couple separate but perfect when together, living in an imperfect world. Sad but realistic. Thanks for reading and commenting!
Re: Reinventing a Quartermaine - Feedback « Reply #4 on Jan 24, 2009, 1:06pm »
I am so glad I came across this fic. This was one of those times that I found myself agreeing with Sonny. LOL Up until the time you told us who Jason was married to I had it being Courtney. Anyway Thanks for sharing this fic and I can't wait to read more that you share with us!!
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And you were right. Elizabeth did still have some family issues, and Jason could have fought for her harder. Also, don’t forget that Sonny could have stepped in, too. Basically, what happened to Jason and Elizabeth is just further proof that they were an imperfect couple separate but perfect when together, living in an imperfect world. Sad but realistic. Thanks for reading and commenting!